These holidays have been fun I went to village pools in Havelock North with my friends Joel and his brother Ephraim. First we had a swim we played on the wrestling pole for half an hour, after that we ate chicken and lettuce sandwiches and we had mountain dew, it was so delicious.
Next we had another swim the water was freezing cold so we brought a zombie chew that was from the counter and we lay in the shinning sun. My mum told us to put some sun block on before we go back into the water so we don't get sunburn then we jumped back into the pool and we did bombs, spins, flips, dives and we did manus. At the village there are three pools a large big pool for lanes, heated pool and a really deep pool my friend was a bit scared because it is deep and he cant swim but my other friend Joel could not swim but he wanted to play with me so we did at first he did not want to swim to the middle but he might of drowned so he just held on to the handlebar then he was not scared and he could swim to the middle of the pool but he need my help so we got a board for him.
After that we had another four hours of swimming. We did lots of cool things, we grabbed boards and jumped on them and then we made a long stepping stones with the boards and we ran across them and at the end me and my friend Joel jumped off the boards and dived in the pool It was really fun we did it lots of times. After that we went and got changed and had a little play in the park we played on the scooter and on the swing then my mum said to come on because we had to go back and drop my friends of at home and we had a really fun day together.
I think this is my favourite piece of writing because
I put in 3 paragraphs and did not use (and) a lot.
My next step is to put more interesting and
describing words in my writing.
