Buddy writing-Cameron

The bridge was as tall as a mountain covering the path like an umbrella.The crabs looked like ants climbing the wall trying to get to the top.The wall looks prickly and scratchy.The snow on the road looked like icing sugar.there were no cars going under like there was people in the city.

free writing

The white leaves are like snow on the tree, as it stretches out it’s long thin branches. The tree was looking like a big white snow monster coming to attack me . The snow was creeping up the tree like a lion creeping up on it’s prey. The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar. The sky looked like a milky way, but the patchy black and white looked like a storm was coming.

I choose descriptive picture writing.

I like my writing because its descriptive and I has lots of similes in it and the most descriptive one was The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar.

I enjoyed Henare O’Keefe because he was really funny and he said that you can give without loving but can't love without giving.  I also enjoyed Joe, head boy of Hastings Boys High School because he inspired us to have fun, be there, choose your attitude and also make your mother a cup of tea. Joe said that you can make a difference even if it is 1 or 1000 you can make a difference the story about the boy who through the starfish and he through it  back in the water. Paora said to work hard, work smart and work together it really inspired me to do that and try hard in everything I do. Working together is better than working by yourself.

buddy writing

The big white horse looks like the snow on the top of the mountains.The tail is fluffy like the clouds in the sky.It likes to eat green, bright grass.The horse colourful like a rainbow in the sky.It looks like a horse skeleton with Its bonie legs standing on the grass.

I have been working with my working buddy Sneha she is 6 and we have been doing a descriptive piece of writing.

Buddy writing

Under the deep blue sea was a beautiful mermaid.Picking yellow petals that look like the bright yellow sun.Her tail looks like the bright grass and her fin looks like a leaf blowing on the tree.The rocks looking like the big blue sky.Her hair looks like an orange flower.

I have been working with my working buddy Rhianna she is 7 and we have been doing a descriptive piece of writing.

TAC cross country

My legs were like they were falling of as I was running up the steep hills,running intill my legs were at the very fastest.I saw everybody passing me as I was trying to keep up with my team.I was following a person from puketupu and ran down the hill that forced me to go faster and faster on the side of me was all the my classmates slurping there juices and cheering me on at the same time.

The second lap I was running passed my class mates and then i tripped myself up and fell onto the ground I Quickly stood back up tom my feet and was still coming in the same place.Charging up the hill taking a shorter route instead of the normal track.Sprinting to the finish line trying my hardest to pass the person in front of me I crossed the finish line coming 19th I got my number and went to the desk to put my name and my number.

After that I went to my bag and grabbed my money to buy me and my friend a juicey

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Descriptive writing

The elephant

As the sun rises behind the elephant it charges through the jungle barging through everything in its way. The elephant swinging his trunk like a swaying swing in the playground and Its ears flapping like birds wings flapping in the distance.The animals around the elephant like fish running away from the great white shark.

This term we are writing descriptive pieces.We are using figurative language.Here is an example from an image I choose.