Friday, 7 November 2014

free writing

The white leaves are like snow on the tree, as it stretches out it’s long thin branches. The tree was looking like a big white snow monster coming to attack me . The snow was creeping up the tree like a lion creeping up on it’s prey. The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar. The sky looked like a milky way, but the patchy black and white looked like a storm was coming.

I choose descriptive picture writing.

I like my writing because its descriptive and I has lots of similes in it and the most descriptive one was The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar.

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