Buddy writing-Cameron

The bridge was as tall as a mountain covering the path like an umbrella.The crabs looked like ants climbing the wall trying to get to the top.The wall looks prickly and scratchy.The snow on the road looked like icing sugar.there were no cars going under like there was people in the city.

free writing

The white leaves are like snow on the tree, as it stretches out it’s long thin branches. The tree was looking like a big white snow monster coming to attack me . The snow was creeping up the tree like a lion creeping up on it’s prey. The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar. The sky looked like a milky way, but the patchy black and white looked like a storm was coming.

I choose descriptive picture writing.

I like my writing because its descriptive and I has lots of similes in it and the most descriptive one was The snow on the ground looked like a blanket of icing sugar.